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WRiTING

Waking Up - My example.

When I woke up I could hear my brother snoring when i screeched i fell off my bunk bed..my brother did not wake because he was sleepy.It was so quiet until the **piercing** alarm clock went off.

SCHOOL PICNIC DISASTER

On friday 24th of february i had to arrive at school early because we had to go for a school picnic at YMCA pools. Weall were excited .The bell rang i quickly ran and sat on the mat MR Toupee Vea took the roll and told us about the rules I said that I wanted to go on the slide first Rueben said he wanted to go on every thing we all laughd.We were all ready and packed. we all lined up out side.We walked to the caught we sat down and missis Raman told us that she had the first aid kit and the sun scream.We all walked to the bus and drove to swimarama in the bus i was playing my ukulele and lynda asked for a turn and blessing also did so i gave it to lynda and said to give it to bleesing after.when we got to the pools me and the class was exited but wehn we got there we found out we werent going to swim.It was a catastrophe we all were disappointed that we werent swimming.